Saturday, March 31, 2012

"Trouble in Mind" #11

TUBE
         (for Cronkite)

Loose canister of security
forces people back behind
modern TVs’ flat plasma of fears; throw
an old CRT in the street
and its vacuum explodes
into words the shapes of
rocks & bottles.



2 comments:

  1. Tom,

    Here's the test comment. I really like the echo of "loose cannon" I hear in the first line of this one. Trouble in Mind worked as a sequence very well when you presented it last night at BSC.

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    1. Thanks for the test and for your astute and complimentary comment. Now if we can stir a little more response, I'd get even more excited.

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